There is a place where noone else can go except me
Unless I let one in, no other can be
This space is reserved for those who identify
With me when I laugh, when I shout, when I cry
Not many are invited, this place is private you see
I guess you could think of it as a symbolic VIP
Invitation only
Eliminates being lonely
Sign in and hang your coat
Main rule – don’t come to gloat
About what I have or what I don’t
Your visit will not go well, no it won’t
My bouncer is my soul and will throw you out
Our meeting is not about class, certainly not clout
I am willing to share with all walks of life
But non-mutual competition begets envy and strife
You are who you are just as I am – let it be
Should it be so easy to ruin your acquaintance with me?
I think not, just have some coffee, beer, even tea
Where it goes from here, who knows – we’ll see
Otherwise I can simply sit here by myself
Not contemplating on status or wealth
This is not what life should be geared towards
Rather happiness, satisfaction, and peace – moving forward
If you’d like to join me, you’re welcome to
When you arrive, let right be what you will do
Make the best of your day as well as mine
After all, what is better than spending quality time?
It has to be living as you are and not fretting the rest
Where is your private place? When you find it, don’t settle for less
Sep 26, 2013 @ 08:12:47
Absolutely LOVED this, Charlene! Wonderful flow, rhyme and message! ♥
Sep 26, 2013 @ 08:20:32
Thank you so much Lauren! ❤
Sep 26, 2013 @ 15:25:29
“My bouncer is my soul”-absolutely! Words of wisdom well said. As we grow, we learn the importance of who belongs in our circle. Truly, not many can be allowed in.
Sep 26, 2013 @ 18:01:14
Thank you Kim, and yes – we must be very careful when opening the entrance to the door of our hearts. 🙂
Sep 26, 2013 @ 17:47:41
“not many are invited” I see it as the interior self, private but inclusive of the few who do not violate the privilege of invitation.
Sep 26, 2013 @ 17:57:59
You are exactly right – thank you for this wonderful comment! 🙂
Sep 26, 2013 @ 18:50:54
always good to have a place to yourself, even if it is just inside your head… you really need time alone sometimes, despite everyday demands
Sep 26, 2013 @ 20:55:45
I love the way you say this – my thoughts exactly! Thank you for your awesome comment Freya! 🙂
Sep 30, 2013 @ 00:52:45
I try to balance private places with being social… it’s not always easy, as you allude to here…xx
Sep 30, 2013 @ 18:33:32
🙂